2019年7月6日雅思寫作考試權威點評!

原標題:2019年7月6日雅思寫作考試權威點評!

2019年7月初嘅雅思考試已經結束,環球教育老師為大家分析點評la本次考試嘅寫作部分,趕快來看看吧:

A類小作文

【作文類型】柱狀圖(動態)

【作文題目】The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 to 2002, with projections to 2050.

【綜合點評】動態柱狀圖。關於世界各國嘅人口百分比嘅變化(印度,中國,美國,日本)。考生需要注意動態圖嘅變化用詞同表達,以及時間改變嘅唔同時態區分。

A類大作文

【作文題目】Research says that more and more business training and meetings take place online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

【題目分析】advantage/disadvantage類題型。科技類話題本年度出現la三次,本次為第四次。該類型屬於常規話題之一,也係平時練習同成日講解嘅話題。需要注意將科技結合工作類型嘅表達,包括員工同產能嘅相關短語。

【題材類別】科技同工作

【參考範文】

Online meetings and training have gradually become a trend of business with the facilitation of technology. While class teaching brings certain benefits, I assert that merits of distant programs are irreplaceable in the business world.

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In a company, since the frequency of business conferences is always changing in order to coordinate with the process of various projects, it is less probable to gather all engaged members and conduct a meeting simultaneously. Instead, electronics such as online conferencing software could transcend geographical barrier no matter how distant the employees are, contributing to an efficient communication of idea exchange. Hence, it is the flexibility of cyber meetings that caters for both employees and superiors.

On top of the effectiveness brought by online meetings, training programs via internet is also favorable ascribed to a relatively lower expense. In other words, not only does it reduce the cost of transportation for learners as there is no need to assemble, but also the

investment on facilities for trainers when holding a gym class. Besides, compared with conventional method of training curricula, international corporations can adopt online platforms if authoritative professionals are invited to impart knowledge and skills, which benefits employees in a worldwide scale.

Undeniably, gathering of team partners can enhance the cohesion and cultivate team spirit in a company, through which better results can be achieved thanks to face-to-face communication. What is more, one indispensable benefit of traditional training is that interactions between classmates and trainers are so intimate that prompt feedbacks and close relationships would be realized.

In a word, there are certain pros and cons of implementing online meetings in comparison with traditional method. It should be emphasized that the advent of this new type always functions as a supplement in order to satisfy the requirement of different groups.

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