雅思小作文開頭段怎麼改寫好?

原標題:雅思小作文開頭段點樣改寫好?

相信la解雅思嘅同學們一定明白,雅思小作文也係套路慢慢,喺我們熟悉la評分標準同研究過雅思考官嘅滿分作文後,才發現雅思小作文隻需要以下幾步,輕鬆搞定

熱身階段

1. 圖表類型

柱狀體、餅圖、表格、線形圖,地圖同流程圖

2. 寫作要求

客觀性,準確性,詳盡性

3. 段落設置

進入正題

今天我們具體來說說雅思小作文開頭段嘅修改規則

開頭段嘅寫法:改寫 / 轉述題目

同義替換

1. 同義詞替換

2. 關鍵詞詞性、位置嘅轉換

3. 時間、地點嘅改寫

4. 名詞同從句之間嘅相互轉換

原題:The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

改後:The chart describes the percentage of diverse types (同義詞替換)of poor families (改變關鍵詞嘅位置同詞性)in Australia in 1999.

show = describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/

summarize/ outline/ indicate

give information about/compare

proportion = percentage

categories = kinds, types

families = households

families living in poverty = poor families

men and women = males and females

population = people

2. 時間、國家嘅改寫。

原句:The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

時間改寫:

between March 1993 and March 1999

during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.

地點改寫(具體 概括)

in the U.S. and Japan:

in two different countries

3. 名詞同從句之間嘅相互轉換

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate)

unemployment rates

how unemployment rates changed

總結階段

最後,我們通過一個題目來練習一下

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

原題:The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

改寫1:The given line chart compares the percentage of aged people in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.

改寫2:The main concern of the following graph is to present how aged people fluctuate in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.

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